Writing review for #Kingsman and can’t remember another word for “sneakery” … Pretty sure I made that word up, actually.
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Writing | Best Advice
The best advice I have ever received, in regards to writing strong women, was to just write women. I write stories as a hobby, but looking back at my work the main characters have predominantly been men. Simply put, this is because they are easier for me to write; I don’t feel like there is some standard I need to meet.
This is not OK.
As creators, we should not be afraid to write female characters. We should write strong women. Injured women dealing with their pain. Women who cry because they aren’t afraid to be emotional. Women who don’t need romance to feel good about themselves. Women who love being in love. Strong women. Frail women. Black women. Aboriginal women. Crippled women. The list goes on and on…
We should be writing women who are human.
I’ll leave you with this quote:
“Screw writing “strong” women. Write interesting women. Write well-rounded women. Write complicated women. Write a woman who kicks ass, write a woman who cowers in a corner. Write a woman who’s desperate for a husband. Write a woman who doesn’t need a man. Write women who cry, women who rant, women who are shy, women who don’t take no shit, women who need validation and women who don’t care what anybody thinks. THEY ARE ALL OKAY, and all those things could exist in THE SAME WOMAN. Women shouldn’t be valued because we are strong, or kick-ass, but because we are people. So don’t focus on writing characters who are strong. Write characters who are people.” — MadLori
Random | Drifting In Pacific Rim
Pacific Rim is one of my all-time favorite films. It is an entertaining film about people working together to find a solution to a problem that is bigger than any one country or government. But, that’s one topic that is an entirely different post which, if you follow me on Facebook you will have seen me laughing about accidentally writing.
What I’d like to talk about in this post is drifting, because I’ve seen a number of discussions about how angry people were that Jaeger Pilots weren’t able to magically read each-other’s minds and immediately know everything about each-other.
What do I think drifting is?
In my opinion, drifting is connecting on a deeply intimate level with your co-pilot to find similar experiences or emotions that bring the two individuals together as one stronger whole.
For instance, when Yancy tells Raleigh that “I’m in your brain, I know” this statement is more indicative of their close relationship as brothers than reading Raleigh’s mind. Yancy does know what Raleigh is thinking, because he knows how Raleigh thinks not because he can read his brother’s mind.
One of the strongest complaints about drifting in the film is why Raleigh wasn’t instantly aware of the chain sword when he and Mako first drifted. Personally, my Brother’s remarks on the topic are my favorite, that it was stupid/lazy for a pilot to know that their machine had been modified and NOT find out about all of those changes immediately.
Travis Beacham, the writer for Pacific Rim, posted the following picture to visually illustrate the drift and said,
“For your reference. A half-assed verbal illustration of what a drift with a new partner might be like. Red for one mind. Blue for the other. Purple for blended thoughts. Enjoy.”
Looking at this discussion, one can clearly see that these are two individuals that are processing different input and thinking about different things and yet, are still able to come together in order to move forward towards their common goal.
There are a number of other indications that the drift is not mind-reading. Travis says that the drift is fluid and is driven by emotions, fantasies, memories, etc. The id of one pilot cues the other pilot’s id and so on and so forth (1).
Raleigh did not know about the chain sword because it wasn’t something that Mako thought about, even subconsciously, until the moment that she needed it. As individuals, they were thinking about different (arguably, more important) things up to that point (3).
Travis also stated that drifting can be difficult if the pilots do not share common memories to use as reference points. This can make or break a pilot team, because two minds are learning how to communicate in this entirely foreign way with another mind (2).
Pilots need there to be common ground in order for their two minds to come together and successfully drift.
To sum things up, drifting is an open communication between two minds, a dialogue if you will. It does not mean that a pilot immediately knows everything about their partner. The more times a pair drifts and the longer/deeper the drift, then the more they will learn about each other.
If you’d like to read my review of the Pacific Rim Novelization, you can find that post HERE.
Sources:
(1) Travis Beacham, what-memories-do-you-share-when-you-first-drift
(2) Travis Beacham, why-do-jaeger-pilots-talk-out-loud-to-their
(3) Travis Beacham, coelasquid-hey-i-actually-finished-a-comic-on-a
Two Book Tuesday
Just a short post this week since spare time has been quite sparse. 🙂
I’ve been spending most of my free time studying for Midterms and haven’t had much time to spare for “fun” reading, so this post will be about two books that I was really excited to add to my want-to-read list.
Spork by Kyo Maclear is a children’s picture book about, you guessed it, a spork! Poor little Spork doesn’t fit in with the rest of the cutlery in the drawer; the spoons think him too point and the forks too round. Will he every be picked for mealtime?
The art style for this picture book is right up my alley and is something that immediately drew my eye to the title. In addition to teaching young children about tolerance of others and learning that individuality is a-ok, “Spork” looks like it could very easily be one of the cutest little books I’ve read this year.
And the second book that I’m excited to read (I’ve just checked it out from the library) is Mort(e) by Robert Repino.
Mort(e) is a very unique take on human extinction… The Colony, a race of intelligent ants that have been working for thousands of years to eradicate humans are taking the next step in their war effort. They turn the surface animals into high-functioning beings who will rise up to kill their human masters.
The main character of this novel is Mort(e). A former housecat turned war hero, Mort(e) is looking for his pre-transformation friend – a dog named Sheba. In order to find his long lost friend, Mort(e) will travel to one of the last human strongholds and there he will discover the source of EMSAH (a human bio-weapon) and perhaps will find the answers to his questions.
Really, it sounds like the coolest animal point-of-view story that I’ve read since Raptor Red by Robert T. Bakker.
Once the craziness of Midterms has passed, I plan to crack open “Mort(e)” and read it in the evening, while keeping “Spork” for my next 15-minute break at work.
Are you reading anything interesting?
Two Book Tuesday
A book that I am currently reading is The Wisdom of the Shire: A Short Guide To A Long and Happy Life by Noble Smith.
I’ve just finished chapter one, “How Snug Is Your Hobbit-hole?” and the main idea that came out of this chapter is the sense of home that a person can have, not necessarily in a place, but in an idea or memory of that perfect, safe environment that they consider home.
A book that I want to read in the future… The Captain’s Table: Fire Ship by Diane Carey.
This is one of my all-time favorite science-fiction novels. Interestingly, it is published fan-fiction (more on this at a later date) about the television show Star Trek: Voyager. It is my favorite out of all the different Star Trek series and movies.
Originally, I read this book as a young teenager of perhaps twelve or thirteen years of age and it remains to this day the only title that I have ever had to skip to the end just so that I could be reassured of a happy ending.
Fire Ship follows Captain Kathryn Janeway as she recovers from severe injuries and learns to cope with the knowledge that her ship, and friends, have been destroyed. That she failed to bring the home, as she’d so-often promised to do. Alone in the Delta Quadrant, aboard an alien ship, and with no other options available to her, Janeway does what she does best… She survives, takes life by the horns and comes out the other side of things the victor.
I remember crying, smiling, and feeling absolutely heartsick while reading this book and I cannot wait to start it again. It’s not often that a book has such an impact on me that I remember it even years later.
So, two books that I’m thinking about this Tuesday. What are you reading?
Random | Specter vs. Spectre
I was cleaning out my inbox and found an email from Dictionary.com from way back in 2014! Yeah, I know I should clean my inbox out more often, lol. Anyways the word of the day for November 30 was specter, of which the British spelling is spectre…
Now, some of you may be aware of this but I’ve been playing a lot of Mass Effect recently and the first thing I thought of when I saw the word of the day was the video game that I’d (by November 2014) devoted more than 100 hours of my life to.
In the Mass Effect trilogy you play a Commander in the human Alliance Navy. Commander Shepard is a Spectre, one of the elite agents that answer only to the Citadel Council and basically have free-rein to get their assignments done in whatever way they feel is the best way.
This means that you can either play as a Paragon Shepard and unite the galaxy by building alliances or you can choose to be Renegade Shepard and, basically, rule through fear and bullying. Either method will bring you to the climactic end of the Mass Effect trilogy and no matter which you choose, you may have lost some friends along the way.
I’m on my third play-through of this trilogy and I’ve played mostly as Paragon because many of the Renegade choices are actually quite distasteful to me.
Have you played the Mass Effect trilogy? What did you think about it?
The other Spectre that came to mind is the recently announced addition to the Bond movie franchise. Starring Daniel Craig as Bond, Naomie Harris as Moneypenny, Ben Whishaw as the Quartermaster, and Ralph Fiennes as M (you will be missed, Judi Dench).
Based on the highly popular book series by Ian Fleming, this latest movie has me excited before I’ve even seen the first trailer or stills! I’ve enjoyed the Craig-Bond movies and I can’t wait to see what happens in the next one…
I may have to go back and watch all the movies that came before, just to be prepared. Also because I haven’t seen the Sean Connery movies in quite a while and… well, Sean Connery!
So, are you excited about the new Bond movie?
Random | Unshelved or Brianna?
A number of years ago my sister, Brianna, had an encounter with a patron at the Circulation Desk. She had informed the patron that he owed a small fine and asked if he wanted to pay it that day. The patron responded with a question, “So, how can we make this go away?”
To this day, I laugh at my sister’s response. She told the patron, as only she could, that if he paid the fine then it would go away.
And do you know what? He was shocked enough by her response that he paid the fine that very day.
For family and friends, what are your favorite “Brianna-related” memories?
This Unshelved comic strip reminded me of that and I thought I’d share. Click the comic to see more of the fun library-times that is the Unshelved comic series…
Meandering Michelle 